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Old 07-31-14, 08:16 AM
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Swim

That girl with a disordered brain
and a disturbed past
hanging her head in shame
knowing she won't last

Everything was handed to her on a platter
except for happiness and peace
back then it didn't matter
it didn't yet feel like a disease

Now she's hooked on drugs
a little, desperate lifeline
neither fully here nor there
surely her life can't be mine?

All that's left is a label
which doesn't talk of fear or pain
and the growing realisation
that she truly is insane

That girl with mental health problems
that no one can really see
trapped forever by her mind
surely that girl can't be me?
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Old 07-31-14, 08:57 AM
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That girl with bomb like poetry,
i've seen her share peoples strife and glee,
an endearing trait most certainly,
draws respect and trust from more than me,
to feel with depth, can test ones sanity,
know that for every perceived deficiency,
lies masked an even greater capability.
she swims in surf of every sea,
when she finds the lake, she'll float afree.
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Some, thanks!!
That was neat
and very sweet!!!

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p.s. yesterday... the cat attacked the dog



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p.s. yesterday... the cat attacked the dog





Is the dog ok??
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Missed it! Yeah it was a little friendly sausage thing and the cat was hiding under my car... it jumped out as the dog walked past throwing claws and hisses... poor doggir got a shock... me too! It started ru ru roofing for 3 mins and its owner was laughing... hecause it lives with a cat as well and they dont get along!
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