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Asylum 04-09-13 09:33 PM

Re: Writing in the active voice using action verbs
 
Ocyan's spider frightens me.

dresser 04-17-13 10:18 PM

Re: Writing in the active voice using action verbs
 
are we talkin about communicating because I made the mistake of having a script in my head as to how my kid would say they loved me therefore never seeing or hearing there method of sayin they loved me, everyone want to be another willy shakspeare . his writngs are great because he listened then asked question of the people because there was no such thing as a dictionary so when he put word together He/they defined the words , It was a clarification of the conffussion of the times as well as a play Now look what we have even with a dictionary, you have a style yet is there anything their to hear and who can I ask if
It is a correct interpretation willy gave us lots to look at what were we to see,hear, feel,
change or understand diferantly????? when we get what we want, In our struggles for self
and the world makes us king for a day, we must go to the mirror and look at ourselves

anonymouslyadd 06-15-13 11:25 PM

Re: Writing in the active voice using action verbs
 
Crouching below the basement steps, her heart raced against her ribs, anticipating the thief inching towards her.

anonymouslyadd 06-23-13 08:57 PM

Re: Writing in the active voice using action verbs
 
Drawing closer to him, she pursed her lips, and they kissed for the first time.

anonymouslyadd 07-03-13 05:09 AM

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Constructing compelling sentences is not easy, sometimes.

anonymouslyadd 08-03-13 10:55 PM

Re: Writing in the active voice using action verbs
 
Her piano play echoed throughout the walls of Smith's Theatre.

BellaVita 08-03-13 11:16 PM

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Enjoying these, anon. (just had to say) :)

anonymouslyadd 08-03-13 11:21 PM

Re: Writing in the active voice using action verbs
 
Bella Vita's kindness cures cripplingly low self-esteem.

anonymouslyadd 01-13-14 02:42 AM

Re: Writing in the active voice using action verbs
 
Sunsets incite my dreams.

anonymouslyadd 01-13-14 02:45 AM

Re: Writing in the active voice using action verbs
 
While nice clothes and a perm made her look good, manipulation and deceit oozed out of her pores.

dvdnvwls 01-13-14 02:50 AM

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Colourless green ideas sleep furiously.

anonymouslyadd 01-13-14 02:53 AM

Re: Writing in the active voice using action verbs
 
The pipe dripped all night long and formed a puddle underneath the drain.

anonymouslyadd 01-13-14 02:53 AM

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After racing around the block with her friends, she plopped on the chair and fell asleep.

Daydreamin22 01-13-14 03:08 AM

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Then, she woke up and did a front handspring and sprinted out the door to go get some donuts.

dvdnvwls 01-13-14 03:43 AM

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"Replication is no substitute for creativity!" griped Anna.


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